BOOK 09 • AGES 3–6 • COMPLETE MANUSCRIPT PREVIEW
EMOJI CARNIVAL

EMPATHY & GRUMPINESS
AND THE LOST BALLOON

A warm story about looking beneath a grumpy face, asking instead of guessing, and helping without taking over.

EMPATHY • BUS ONEGRUMPINESS • BUS TWO
FINAL STORY TEXT • PAGE-BY-PAGE VISUAL DIRECTION

Written specifically for ages 3–6: highly illustrated, concrete social-emotional language, clear cause-and-effect, repeated question patterns and approximately 15–50 words per story page.

PAGE 01

The yellow balloon

Grumpiness had one favourite carnival thing: a giant yellow balloon shaped like a moon. They tied it carefully to the bus rail while everyone unloaded picnic baskets.

ART: Balloon is oversized and visually memorable; knot clearly shown on rail.
PAGE 02

Gone

WHOOSH! A gust tugged the ribbon loose. The moon balloon bounced above the food tents, over the game stalls, and out of sight. Grumpiness stomped one foot. “Perfect. Just perfect.”

ART: Balloon path crosses full spread; Grumpiness watches helplessly.
PAGE 03

A grumpy face

Empathy came over. “You look grumpy.” “Excellent detective work,” Grumpiness muttered. Empathy almost said, “Cheer up.” Instead they asked, “Do you want help, company, or space?”

ART: Three simple icons beside Empathy: helping hand, two seats, open space.
PAGE 04

Help, maybe

Grumpiness crossed both arms. “Help. But do not tell me it is just a balloon.” Empathy nodded. “It was your balloon.” “My favourite balloon.” “Then let us look for your favourite balloon.”

ART: Empathy mirrors seriousness; no dismissive smile.
PAGE 05

First clue

They found a yellow ribbon caught on the popcorn cart. “There!” Empathy said. Grumpiness frowned. “That could be any ribbon.” Empathy looked closer. “True. What made yours different?”

ART: Magnifying visual detail without turning story into mystery series.
PAGE 06

The silver stars

“Mine had three silver stars near the knot,” said Grumpiness. The ribbon on the cart had no stars. “Not yours,” Empathy said. “Good checking.” Grumpiness’s frown became a little less sharp.

ART: Close comparison panel: plain ribbon versus three-star ribbon.
PAGE 07

Ask, do not assume

A vendor pointed toward the petting zoo. “I saw a yellow balloon that way.” Empathy started running. Grumpiness said, “Wait. Did it have silver stars?” The vendor thought. “Yes—three!”

ART: Vendor holds up three fingers; Grumpiness now leading one question.
PAGE 08

The fence

At the petting zoo, the balloon was stuck high in a tree beyond the fence. Grumpiness groaned. “Of course it is.” Empathy said, “I can see why you are frustrated.” “Please do not climb that fence.”

ART: Safety boundary strong; balloon visible in tree, fence clearly marked.
PAGE 09

What would help?

Empathy asked, “What would help right now?” Grumpiness pointed to a worker with a long picking pole. “Someone who is allowed in there.” “Good plan,” said Empathy. They asked the worker together.

ART: Adult worker badge/tool; children remain behind public boundary.
PAGE 10

Almost

The worker lifted the pole. The balloon bobbed once, twice—then slipped to another branch. Grumpiness groaned even louder. Empathy did not say, “Calm down.” They said, “That was close.”

ART: Funny near-miss; Empathy stays beside rather than correcting emotion.
PAGE 11

Try again

“Do you want to keep trying?” Empathy asked. Grumpiness stared at the balloon. “Yes.” The worker changed the pole angle and gently hooked the ribbon. Down came the yellow moon.

ART: Clear collaborative geometry; balloon descends safely.
PAGE 12

Still grumpy

Grumpiness hugged the balloon. “I am still grumpy.” Empathy laughed. “You are allowed.” “Even though we found it?” “Finding it fixed the problem. Feelings do not always switch off that fast.”

ART: Hugged balloon, still-frowning face; emotional nuance.
PAGE 13

A better knot

Back at the buses, Grumpiness tied the ribbon with help from the driver. Empathy watched. “Want me to check it?” “Yes.” Together they tugged the knot twice. Secure.

ART: Two-tug safety check; adult driver present for knot help.
PAGE 14

What empathy did

“You did not make me stop being grumpy,” Grumpiness said. Empathy blinked. “Was I supposed to?” Grumpiness almost smiled. “No. You helped me find what mattered.”

ART: Small almost-smile; yellow balloon floats above both.
PAGE 15

Three good questions

Empathy counted on three fingers. “Help, company, or space? What matters about it? What would help now?” Grumpiness nodded. “Keep those questions. They are useful.”

ART: Three-question icon strip for recall.
PAGE 16

Moon over the road

At sunset, the twin buses rolled away. The yellow balloon floated safely inside the window this time. Grumpiness leaned back. “I am less grumpy.” Empathy smiled. “Thanks for telling me.”

ART: Balloon glows like moon inside bus; warm road ending.
EMOTIONAL-LEARNING LAYER

Empathy asks before it guesses.

Adult/educator note: The story distinguishes empathy from cheerleading or fixing. It models validating another person’s experience, asking what kind of support is wanted, identifying what matters, and preserving safety while solving a problem.

  1. Why was the balloon important to Grumpiness?
  2. What three choices did Empathy offer?
  3. Why did they ask about the silver stars?
  4. Why did they get a worker instead of climbing the fence?
  5. Can a problem be fixed before a feeling is gone?

Front-cover treatment

A huge yellow moon balloon floats above Empathy and Grumpiness at the carnival fence. Empathy points toward the safe path while Grumpiness holds a ribbon marked with three silver stars.

Series lockup: EMOJI CARNIVAL — BOOK 09

Authors: E. H. Ackerman & J. D. Ackerman

Back-cover treatment

The moon balloon becomes a visual path through three icons: HELP • COMPANY • SPACE.

Copy: Grumpiness has lost a favourite balloon and does not want anyone to say, “Cheer up.” Empathy has a better idea: ask what matters, listen to the answer, and help in the way that is actually wanted.

Release status: COMPLETE MANUSCRIPT PREVIEW — NOT PRINT-READY. Final character sheets, cover/interior artwork, layout, trim/bleed, laid-out proof, metadata verification, rights and final release QA remain required.